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Nighthawk
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 Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 10:48 am Post subject: I Was Alone |
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I was alone
I stood at the rim of the abyss and looked down
I was alone.
And when I teetered and fell
hurtling into the depths of despair
I was alone.
But when I lay broken, lost without hope
I whispered ‘I love you’ and called out your name
And swiftly, on gossamer wings,
as I called out,
you came
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Henry Miller
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Vivid. I loved it, I felt alone while reading it.
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Nighthawk
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Hope you did not feel alone at the end.
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